"...There may never be another opportunity
For me to hear what you never intended to say."
Oh, this is so melancholy, as are several of today's entries. I like your unique take on the picture.
Ah, how true! I love your take on the pic of the day! Have a great week!Sylvia
Sounds like a broken heart to me...nice oneyou can hear the echos
I love the "Not so much a secret as purposeful neglect." Very well done my friend. Let's hope the memories can be set back in stone as one whole. Well done. Have a wonderful Monday :)
A thoughtful microfiction, that conveys a lot of emotion. I wonder why he let it fall apart?
Oops, these divorces can get so messy! My 140 is here
That's very poetic. And rather romantic. Very good.
A bit of malice aforethought there - nicely chilling!
But whom was he spiting to let it all fall like that? A nagging wife? The neighbors? Selfish relatives? Ahhh, I want more!
you can certainly cut to 140 or less.nice take!I played too.
So much in those few words. Great!
I suppose some people enjoy letting things go bad. But this was good...well done!
Aww, a slow farewell it seems. A much longer journey than its creation, probably.
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Oh so true, sometimes we just got to let go of the past and make tracks for the future. Wonderful look at the picture.
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