Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Spontaneity

Join the fun!

my impulse to write
makes me incredibly late
But it is worth it.

I tap my fingers
to the 5 7 5 beat
and scribble it down.

Then glance at the time.
I've not a minute to waste
Leave now or get axed.

10 comments:

  1. You always have fun with haikus! Love the last line :)

    ReplyDelete
  2. These are very clever ... and made me smile.

    ReplyDelete
  3. To axe or not to axe...is that the question?

    And the answer?

    ReplyDelete
  4. This is the best! Grinning ear to ear. Hope you don't get fired but great job firing these haiku off!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Good set, Jillian ... I love their message particularly under the time crunch ...

    + small world ... I am from Houma!! :D

    ReplyDelete
  6. Great verses and I have joined in the fun for Sensational Haiku Wednesday! :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. I like this spontaneous trip of haiku. Brilliant! :O)

    ReplyDelete
  8. So glad you took the time to get them done... and that it didn't get you axed ;)

    I'm late, as usual... crazy week. Hope to see you again next week for our 100th week of haiku!! Bring your friends!

    ReplyDelete
  9. writing can be truly addictive. there is no doubt about that. :)

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/free-soul-16-5-11/

    ReplyDelete

I love your comments!