Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Spontaneity

Join the fun!

my impulse to write
makes me incredibly late
But it is worth it.

I tap my fingers
to the 5 7 5 beat
and scribble it down.

Then glance at the time.
I've not a minute to waste
Leave now or get axed.
Airy Nothings by at

10 comments:

  1. septembermom5/18/2011 7:52 AM

    You always have fun with haikus! Love the last line :)

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  2. Liz Rice-Sosne5/18/2011 10:44 AM

    These are very clever ... and made me smile.

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  3. Magical Mystical Teacher5/18/2011 6:08 PM

    To axe or not to axe...is that the question?

    And the answer?

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  4. Donna5/18/2011 6:51 PM

    This is the best! Grinning ear to ear. Hope you don't get fired but great job firing these haiku off!

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  5. Anonymous5/18/2011 11:08 PM

    Good set, Jillian ... I love their message particularly under the time crunch ...

    + small world ... I am from Houma!! :D

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  6. Anonymous5/19/2011 6:23 AM

    Great verses and I have joined in the fun for Sensational Haiku Wednesday! :)

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  7. Anonymous5/19/2011 9:08 AM

    I like this spontaneous trip of haiku. Brilliant! :O)

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  8. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?5/20/2011 10:54 PM

    So glad you took the time to get them done... and that it didn't get you axed ;)

    I'm late, as usual... crazy week. Hope to see you again next week for our 100th week of haiku!! Bring your friends!

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  9. trisha5/21/2011 4:06 AM

    writing can be truly addictive. there is no doubt about that. :)

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/free-soul-16-5-11/

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  10. Anonymous5/28/2011 4:30 AM

    Creative and brilliant!

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