The Picture
The Story
(in 139 characters)
While it took a little longer than expected
The wait was finally over!
Standing there
Until the last person left the train
He never showed.
The Happy Story
(in 141 characters)
Well its not exactly the train to Hogwarts
But it was her train to destiny
After 60 years of serving the world
The world would now serve her.
The Happy Story
(in 141 characters)
Well its not exactly the train to Hogwarts
But it was her train to destiny
After 60 years of serving the world
The world would now serve her.
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Ah, sad, but good one! It's been interesting to see that most of the entries today are rather sad ones, that's been pretty rare! Hope you have a great week!
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Turd....LOL Who's ever waiting is probably better off without him. Good story :) Have a great week ahead :)
ReplyDeleteYour MF is a little sad and full of emotion. Waiting for someone that doesn't show is tough. I've had thoses feelings like I'm sure many of us here have.
ReplyDeleteGood one !
Really sad. Poor lady.
ReplyDeleteAaah ... so sad, good MM!
ReplyDeleteI bet this happens a lot - so sad. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week x
OOOOOOO Waiting can be quite agonising, but a "no show" at the end is devastating! Lovely micro!
ReplyDeleteTrue. Many sad Micro-Fiction Mondays. Well written. I feel for her.
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PG
Very sad for her..... :O(
ReplyDeleteA sad Microfiction. Though one might think it was Rick who didn't show up for Ilsa this time.
ReplyDeleteAh, what a shame. :-(
ReplyDeleteA great take on the picture and nice MM.
i know! i've been writing such sad MF's?!?!!?! I'll be dedicated to happier ones from now on lol
ReplyDeleteI'd like to think that on her way out of the train station she bumped into the man who would become the love of her life! Serendipity!
ReplyDeleteExcellent microfiction my friend. You put so much heart into these brief stories. Love them!
ReplyDeleteYou make me look forward to Mondays. I love your writing and your positive outlook on life. Please, never stop writing.
ReplyDeletePerhaps if she had the courage to take the risk this time, she might bolster herself and try again?
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