Saturday, May 07, 2011

Dusk

The soft, blue-gray light,
The dappled light streaming through horizontal blinds
The imperfect light of which doth shine
Upon my book and unread lines.
Delve

12 comments:

  1. stunning imagery.

    well done.

    Happy Mother's Day.

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  2. Short and sweet! Nice poem.

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  3. I've always loved to see light shining through the blinds at dawn or dusk. Your poem captures the feeling beautifully.

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  4. Hope they won't be unread for much longer.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  5. Mmm, makes me want to curl up in my own room and read in the soft light of evening:)

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  6. Four lines, how swiftly thee steal my heart. Lovely said and beautifully shared, I thank yee for this, for it doth bring me pleasure and great joy.

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  7. Well done! It's very haiku-like in the sense that it perfectly captures one idea or moment in time.

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  8. Beautiful to read - thank you for sharing!

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  9. A fetching piece!

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  10. Lovely piece, very poignant and charming! :)

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