Thursday, November 10, 2016

Unclear Path--Poets United

Its hard to see on days like this
Days when all the world's haze
Is spent up in one silent hiss
In one giant mist
Left standing and wondering
Where you went amiss
Or perhaps you're right where you're meant to be
Only its so hard to see
On days like this.

13 comments:

  1. perhaps you are where you are meant to be... ike the way you've crafted this one.

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  2. everyone can feel this haziness & may be time will clear everything...

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  3. so glad you can relate! thanks for reading :)

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  4. Yes, some days are like that!

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  5. It is hard to see. I think some people will find themselves adjusting their thinking, in the years to come.

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  6. amen, hard, indeed, and this sounds it out perfectly with hisses and misses and queries.

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  7. Powerful words I think you are always there were you meant to be Take care

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