Saturday, April 23, 2011

You never should have known

It was a mistake,
I say,
Telling you.
Then I add,
At least before your pride was in tact.
You had hope.
You had an inkling of respect.
Now it's all shattered.
You should have never known.
Delve

8 comments:

  1. how are you?


    hope you well.


    Enjoyed this, awesome talent.

    Invite you to join poets rally week 42 by sharing a free verse today.
    Appreciate your input.

    Hope to see you in!
    Have A Blessed Easter!
    xxx

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  2. Yes, sometimes the truth should be a well kept secret.

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  3. Wow!!

    Well conveyed the sadness in breaking relation!!! Somethings can't be helped, but you know to portray them well!!


    with warm regards
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  5. welcome.

    you rock.

    very well conveyed sentiments.

    A++

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  6. quite beautiful

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  7. A serrated write, sharp and fabulously done

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