Monday, March 29, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The Picture


The Story
(in 140 characters or less)

Looking @ us now u can barely imagine
how we were once a couple of delinquent 18yr olds.
That tragic night & a body @ the bottom of a bridge

Hosted by Stony River

14 comments:

  1. J - I LOVE that you used 'true' twitter-speak to shorten the count! I'll remember that when I have more to say than I have characters to say it in!

    Well done . . . and mysteriously inviting . . .

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  2. Thank you... I know my 'twitter-speak' is most impressive! lol

    JM

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  3. And they've gotten away with it all these years. Excellent my friend. Well done :)

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  4. a powerful story! they may have got away but still, they have to live with it

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  5. Almost like "The Ode to Billyjoe". I found this quite fun.

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  6. Ah guilt...the one thing you can't outrun. :)

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  7. Wow, who knows what secrets we all hide from each other -- I love this!

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  8. aha! it comes back to haunt them after all these years.
    Well done!

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  9. A 2 headed body that was the reflection of couple intertwined.
    Passion fades and a space separates us now…
    Yet my hand still rests on yours.

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  10. Alesa that is such a beautiful post! I hope u join along with us next Monday.

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  11. I just followed your lead, but thank you for your kind words.
    Might be interesting if the commenters added 140 character fragments to the story... but that, of course, is another story.

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  12. That would be an AWESOME concept. I once did something like that many years ago... the original story teller would give you three options on where to take the story.... so then you chose a path and continued to write... once you hit a crossroad, you posted 3 paths, and its goes on and on. It was lots of fun!

    It would be great to do one large infinite story post!

    JM

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  13. Great take on the picture once again!

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