Monday, March 15, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The Picture

The Story (in 140 characters)

Faces! She saw them everywhere.
Her earliest memory was as a lil girl facing the window
& a sinking feeling that someone was looking at her.

Hosted by: stoney river


  1. Very clever and chiling. This is a good one.

  2. Poor thing, nothing scarier then faces staring at you!
    I had to look around to see if there were any faces looking at me.
    Just my cat, phew
    Very nice, good job!

  3. That's a great but short story. It leaves me wanting more......

  4. Oh wow -- what a wonderful take on it, and what a character she is! You brought back a memory I hadn't thought of in years: I was a child during the Panelling Years (yay, the 70s!) and the panelling next to my bed had all kinds of swirls that looked like faces and phantoms to me, and it terrified me every night. Good Lord, no wonder I'm like I am.

    But I love this story!

  5. Great one for the day -- clever and spooky! I love it! Hope you have a great week!


  6. Rather eerie, right?
    Love the suspense.

    Sorry I am late this week,
    Been really busy shopping for colleges
    With my daughter! Lol

    Happy MM!

    Have you a WONDROUS WEEK!


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  7. Well done, looking through a child's eyes and imagination.

  8. You're so good at these! Excellent.


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