Friday, February 12, 2010

Calliope

I call out for you,
and you come.
Slowly as a creeping mist
you fall.
Dampening my mind with 
the lightest of touches--
Until I'm drenched in you.
Dripping with you.

Airy Nothings by at

9 comments:

  1. Anonymous2/13/2010 10:19 AM

    your writing is beautiful..keep writing :)

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  2. Anonymous2/13/2010 1:33 PM

    Very well written my friend. I liked this :)

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  3. Nessa2/13/2010 4:30 PM

    Very hot.

    Purdie Pyrate

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall12/27/2010 10:30 AM

    powerful,
    wow,
    masterful job here!
    Welcome to JP!

    A++

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  5. Ramesh Sood12/27/2010 11:46 AM

    Wow! Loved it .. lovely write.. my first visit here.. but I am Happy that I am here through Poetry Pot Luck..thanks!!

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  6. Timoteo12/27/2010 2:56 PM

    Sensual!

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  7. Anonymous12/27/2010 9:32 PM

    I like it!

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  8. JAGDISH BALI12/28/2010 1:54 AM

    Delicate and nice.

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  9. JamieDedes1/04/2011 2:50 PM

    I love it ... especially the closing line.

    Wonderful Potluck. Sorry to be late.

    Best wishes for 2011.

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