Monday, June 14, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The Picture

The Story 
(138 characters)

I thought I was getting better.
Thought they'd send me home soon.
But this is a disturbing vision;
I'll just sit here until it goes away.

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10 comments:

  1. I won't let on and they'll never know, that I am haunted with visions of little girls.

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  2. It took a few seconds for it to land...but when it did...Great job!
    clever

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  3. Yes, it's best not to move when you see such a horrible sight.

    ;)

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  4. Lol--thanks for the early morning laugh, Jillien! I like your dry, understated wit. Well done!

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  5. Brilliant take on the picture, and loved the way it is written like verse. Very funny!

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  6. Oh no she is seeing Monkeys instead of little green men!
    I lol at this one Jill. Love that!

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  7. Yep, that vision could send me back to bed for sure! What a funny take on the pic for the day! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  8. You ARE getting better . . . you just have to accept the new NORMAL....ha ha

    Very well done!

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  9. I wonder what she is drinking to have these visions. Apologies for being late in visiting.

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