The Picture
The Story 1
(in 140 characters or less)
Come to us they sang.
But their shrill voices were driving me mad!
If you'd had heard it, you wouldn't blame me for what I did next...
The Story 2
(in 133 characters)
UGH!! Back up off me.
I done told you! I Do Not Have Any More Bait for you to eat.
You're lucky I don't stick a hook in the next one!
hosted by : stony river
OMG I love these. The first one I so want to know. Maybe the hook? Well done my friend :)
ReplyDeleteYou showed them, I know what you mean about shrill voices that drive you mad and when you have enough watch out!
ReplyDeleteBoth were quite well done, I am just wondering what she did next.
ReplyDeleteSounds like, sooner or later, the mermaids would get her "point"!
ReplyDeleteThis was a fun looksee! Thanks! See you next Microfiction Monday, then?
Oh, a cliffhanger for your first one. I want to know what she did in her madness.
ReplyDeleteSecond one--once you start feeding them they'll never go away. Lol!
Wonderful - both of them!
ReplyDeleteOooh! I like the idea of the hook! I, too, know what you mean about shrill voices -- drive me nuts, I know! Great one for the day! Have a fun week!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Excellent entries!
ReplyDeleteNot sure which one I like best...both are great. I wonder what she was using for bait...lobster, maybe? Or clam chowder? Or perhaps just a tuna sandwich....lol
ReplyDeleteYou're so good at these. Terrific!
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