Monday, June 28, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The Picture

The Story 1
(in 140 characters or less)

Come to us they sang.
But their shrill voices were driving me mad!
If you'd had heard it, you wouldn't blame me for what I did next...

The Story 2
(in 133 characters)

UGH!! Back up off me.
I done told you! I Do Not Have Any More Bait for you to eat.
You're lucky I don't stick a hook in the next one!

hosted by : stony river


  1. OMG I love these. The first one I so want to know. Maybe the hook? Well done my friend :)

  2. You showed them, I know what you mean about shrill voices that drive you mad and when you have enough watch out!

  3. Both were quite well done, I am just wondering what she did next.

  4. Sounds like, sooner or later, the mermaids would get her "point"!

    This was a fun looksee! Thanks! See you next Microfiction Monday, then?

  5. Oh, a cliffhanger for your first one. I want to know what she did in her madness.

    Second one--once you start feeding them they'll never go away. Lol!

  6. Oooh! I like the idea of the hook! I, too, know what you mean about shrill voices -- drive me nuts, I know! Great one for the day! Have a fun week!


  7. Not sure which one I like best...both are great. I wonder what she was using for bait...lobster, maybe? Or clam chowder? Or perhaps just a tuna

  8. You're so good at these. Terrific!


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