Sunday, September 19, 2010

Cacophony

I only heard a bit.
A wee bit,
Which definitely showed
You were trying.

But you will hear me.
My voice will trill with praise.
And at the soul--
At the very pit, you will hear God.

2 comments:

  1. I'm reminded of Dickinson from your verse. Awesome!

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  2. wow kelly! thank you for the very flattering comparison.

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