Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

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The subtle thumpings
are the left behind rain drops
searching for their friends.

Kamikaze rain,
free falling from extreme heights,
hoping to connect.

I sit and listen
alone-- this cool spring morning,
Relishing the sound.

But deep within me
A war wages on as well
As I too free fall.

12 comments:

  1. Loved your medly of haiku with the developing theme like a little story. :O)

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  2. I love the Kamikaze rain and war within yourself. How cool is that. Well done.

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  3. I've met a Kamikaze rain more than once in my lifetime...fabulous image!


    Pool of Grace

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  4. Wow!!

    This is cool!! Cool description of rain and ...


    with warm regards
    CatchyTips for Writers

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  5. What an awesome way to describe rain, nicely done!!

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  6. Nice visual images throughout each ... good one! Rain is a favorite of mine ...

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  7. Wow!!! Haiku is cool!!!


    Rain, Nature and the emotions in you!!! Beautifully potrayed!!!

    with warm regards
    CatchyTips for Writers

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  8. I love the Kamikaze rain, too. I love thunderstorms.

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  9. Sorry this is so late - we had some wind damage and I was offline for several days! Love your haiku - really nicely done!! :)

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  10. This is the most impressive set of haiku I've read for a long time...Absolutely amazing. Thanks for sharing.

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  11. I really like haikus though I`ve never written any.
    This one is specially gracious :) Thanks for sharing. I loved the last line!!

    Lu Ann.

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