Saturday, November 14, 2009

Pressed

I'd think you'd fit just right--
Pressed up against me.
Barely sleeping this one night;
Tracing my body by clutching tight.

4 comments:

  1. Thank you so much Kelly. Its funny because this poem started out as 3 stanzas, but it really was NOT working. So I left the only part of the poem that felt right... the very beginning. Many of my 4 line poems that are published are made this way. I write and write--then I delete the whole thing and just leave it bare. I usually never receive feedback on the smaller poems. So I appreciate you comment :)

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  2. perfect rhymes..
    love the flow.

    A+

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  3. I love short poems. They usually say more.

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