Thank you so much Kelly. Its funny because this poem started out as 3 stanzas, but it really was NOT working. So I left the only part of the poem that felt right... the very beginning. Many of my 4 line poems that are published are made this way. I write and write--then I delete the whole thing and just leave it bare. I usually never receive feedback on the smaller poems. So I appreciate you comment :)
Raw and real.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kelly. Its funny because this poem started out as 3 stanzas, but it really was NOT working. So I left the only part of the poem that felt right... the very beginning. Many of my 4 line poems that are published are made this way. I write and write--then I delete the whole thing and just leave it bare. I usually never receive feedback on the smaller poems. So I appreciate you comment :)
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ReplyDeletelove the flow.
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I love short poems. They usually say more.
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