"...There may never be another opportunity
For me to hear what you never intended to say."
Raw and real.
Thank you so much Kelly. Its funny because this poem started out as 3 stanzas, but it really was NOT working. So I left the only part of the poem that felt right... the very beginning. Many of my 4 line poems that are published are made this way. I write and write--then I delete the whole thing and just leave it bare. I usually never receive feedback on the smaller poems. So I appreciate you comment :)
perfect rhymes..love the flow.A+
I love short poems. They usually say more.
I love your comments!