a little--
again.
Its funny,
Honey,
How your smile
Never fades
Even after days
And months
Have passed me by.
Goodbyes
Most every time
We say hello.
There we go--
Again.
Right at the end.
The punctuation:
An exclamation
Mark.
But the end
Nonetheless.
Just another waking dream
But with less of a gleam
And less love it would seem.
JM
Sometimes it is hard to keep bringing love back.
ReplyDeleteThanksgiving MeMe
this is beautiful. i really like it - the part about the end being an exclamation mark. it's such a neat description. love it.
ReplyDeleteLove hangs on even if in the background. Great job Jillien.
ReplyDeletethanks for the positive feedback, gals.
ReplyDeleteI think you hit the nail on the head Kelly!
Funny backstory for this poem:
Last night I told Lee "I'm writing a love poem," and he asked... "About who? Georges St. Pierre?"
( A famous/gorgeous/talented MMA Fighter.)