Monday, November 23, 2009

Yours

I fell in love with you
a little--
again.
Its funny,
Honey,
How your smile
Never fades
Even after days
And months
Have passed me by.
Goodbyes
Most every time
We say hello.
There we go--
Again.
Right at the end.
The punctuation:
An exclamation
Mark.
But the end
Nonetheless.
Just another waking dream
But with less of a gleam
And less love it would seem.

JM

4 comments:

  1. Sometimes it is hard to keep bringing love back.

    Thanksgiving MeMe

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  2. this is beautiful. i really like it - the part about the end being an exclamation mark. it's such a neat description. love it.

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  3. Love hangs on even if in the background. Great job Jillien.

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  4. thanks for the positive feedback, gals.

    I think you hit the nail on the head Kelly!

    Funny backstory for this poem:
    Last night I told Lee "I'm writing a love poem," and he asked... "About who? Georges St. Pierre?"

    ( A famous/gorgeous/talented MMA Fighter.)

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