Monday, January 04, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The Picture


The Story
(In 140 characters or less)

"I'm going places" she snarled at the women as she turned and stalked silently away. Pride and poise practically seeping from her- the bitch.


9 comments:

  1. Yes - very snarly. Well done Jillian! You captured her, as well as the jealous ones!

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  2. You'd have to be that confident to pull off such an outfit. :)

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  3. Now that seems to match that picture perfectly! What an imperious glare - I hadn't noticed it either. Nice

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  4. I didn't notice that until you mentioned it. She does look like someone a person wouldn't want to tangle with. Either that or she is trying to hold back some gas.

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  5. My friend...If I was your inspiration for this, you out did yourself and welcome to the club. I certainly hope you participate weekly in this now. This is wonderful. That bitch...i love her :) Bravo my friend. :)

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  6. THank you all for the nice comments and encouragement. and yes thom you certainly were my inspiration :)

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  7. LOL The last two words give it a great kick, I love it!

    Now, I hope where she's going is the hairdressers, for a new 'do!
    ;-)

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  8. Awesome response to the prompt. Don't mess with that lady :)

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  9. She looks bitch-y to me too...maybe because she is probably hungry!
    Nice to meet you, first time here, I think!

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